wow, nice colours! I like the the 1st and 3rd one very much, it brings out the Japanese colours. As for the 3rd one, I think the body copy is hard to read the way it is positioned though, so maybe if it was switched with the contact it could be more readable. The bottom right space stands out too much, I think there should be a way of using it. Maybe you can make the contact horizontal near the bottom to make use of the bottom right space, and place the body copy where the contact was. The pink could be more light like the colour of sakura. Maybe a Pantone 432C for the body copy as it doesn’t stand the way it is, and the blue’s be more richer so it creates a nice contrast with the type. The colours on the 1st are very nice, and they work well together. You don’t have to change anything with your type or colour as these are just my crazy little ideas, but I’m sure the bottom right space sticks out too much in many people’s eyes. I hope it helps. ?(???)?
wow, nice colours! I like the the 1st and 3rd one very much, it brings out the Japanese colours. As for the 3rd one, I think the body copy is hard to read the way it is positioned though, so maybe if it was switched with the contact it could be more readable. The bottom right space stands out too much, I think there should be a way of using it. Maybe you can make the contact horizontal near the bottom to make use of the bottom right space, and place the body copy where the contact was. The pink could be more light like the colour of sakura. Maybe a Pantone 432C for the body copy as it doesn’t stand the way it is, and the blue’s be more richer so it creates a nice contrast with the type. The colours on the 1st are very nice, and they work well together. You don’t have to change anything with your type or colour as these are just my crazy little ideas, but I’m sure the bottom right space sticks out too much in many people’s eyes. I hope it helps. ?(???)?
Great suggestions of colors!!
I appreciate your tips. Thanks!